Let me take you to a place centuries ago. Where furious battles took place. Strategies were made. People were killed. And nature took its own toll. Read the national level winning fiction story!!
This story was written for central India's biggest cultural national level creative writing event on the topic of 'Medieval Age'. Plot is from Italy and proximity.
This story was written for central India's biggest cultural national level creative writing event on the topic of 'Medieval Age'. Plot is from Italy and proximity.
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Artistic expression Pompeii Volcano in 79 AD |
Eons
ago in 6th century, today’s mainland, Italy, was ruled by King Adaloald,
living in Herstmonceux Castle. The realm was known as Lombard. Kingdom was an
early medieval state established by the Lombards, a German-speaking people,
on the Italian Peninsula. Its capital was Pavia. And Naples was a distant state
which was under imperial control. King Adaloald had put all his efforts to
accomplish the win over Naples. But his all efforts went futile.
The
Kingdom of Lombard was furnished in all vertices. Wealth was stacking. Glory
was at optimum. But future was having something else in its mausoleum. King
Adaloald was having great alchemists in form of Alessandro Cagliostro and
Isabella Cortese.
King
was intending to attack on Naples. But alchemists, in the shrine of prophecies,
with the help of all their magical chants yelled a prediction. A prediction
that an attack on Naples will attract the mass carnage of soldiers. And it
might be so vast that it could be compared to the biggest genocide in the history of Lombard. This lead to public’s
fury and rage. The Lombards were already facing theological and political
differences. Both alchemists were the most reliable consultative and they never
went wrong. In dread, the king ordered all knights to gather. Invasion of
Viking from North and Saracen from South was another concern that influenced
king’s judgment. King Adaloald was going leaps and bounds with the thought - What
in the word has the power to demolish his burly army? "Yes, we are going to attack Naples", King shouted with raucous noise.
That's the amount of research required while writing on a medieval era story! Writer of '300' movie, #RESPECT |
King
then ordered to arrange an assembly in his fortified huge castle. All his consultative,
priests, monks, ministers, advisers, pope was accumulated with all knights
equipped with techniques of sword-and-buckler and sword-and-board providing
surveillance outside fortified castle.
The
castle was transformed in to stealth mode. They were preparing for pitched as well
as siege warfare. Lombard's army includes cavalry forces, horse riders, armours, ballista, infantry,
armed knights. Belfries were getting refurbished. King Adoloald was not willing
to leave a single decision for luck. He was quick-witted and had experience to use
all warfare tactics. This being the reason he remained undefeated in his reign.
All army units started heading towards the Naples.
King
Adaloald claimed, “Our alchemists have never been wrong. What if their prediction
comes true?” his voice getting sturdier. “Your highness, we are marching with
the biggest infantry and siege warfare against them. Our army number can overcome
whole population of Naples. I do not think we have much to worry about.”
Autari, a minister, answered. Taking a sigh of relief King said, “What if we
establish an alliance with our ally, Greeks? Their army is equally strong to
ours...” King was in apprehension.
Thinking
deeply Paul, King’s strategy adviser, said, “Highness, to convey this message
to Greece and aligning their army might take a whole month. We cannot wait this
long. Naples army might get stronger and they might attack us before we do.” In
affirmation king tilted his neck. Interrupting this conversation Alessandro and
Isabella entered the assembly. “What are you planning for now?” Isabella
quoted. “We are telling you, once you enter Naples there will be no turning
back” Alessandro supported Isabella. All ministers blew out laughing. For them
Lombards was an insuperable power. Disappointed alchemist left the hall in
disgrace.
King
Adaloald remained on same stance. To attack Naples with full throttle. Breach
ever building. Destroy the whole infrastructure.
Zoom out Google Map image of Italy and proximity. |
The
army was so large that they have to chop the whole forest to build strong arms,
ballista, spears, and also for burning fuel. Food was required in so huge
number that the tonnes of wheat, meat and grain ration they carried along them were falling
diminutive. And if the whole infantry uses their bow-arrow it could eclipse the Sun. It was burly army.
The
whole troop was encroaching in Naples’s proximity. King and all his advisers,
scholars were drafting their strategy to attack on Naples. Isabella and
Alessandro decided to boycott this meeting.
Paul
explained, “Beside Naples we have Mount Vesuvius, which is a stratovolcano. It
has not erupted since 79 AD. Instead of attacking from north-north-east we should
firstly capture Pompeii. Pompeii is a small state in south-east-east of Mount
Vesuvius. We can send one-third of army to capture Pompeii.” Another adviser,
Bavarii interrupted Paul saying, “But this will disrupt the strength of our
army.” “Exactly, they too will think the same. Instead, our two-third army on
north-north-east will remain in stealth mode. We will attack only on Pompeii.
This will give Naples an illusion that we are attacking them from south-east-east.
And they will divert their army towards the south-east-east. Taking the
advantage of this situation we will attack Naples from north-north-east. In
disruption they might fail to revive their strategy and we will win.” Paul was
known for his intuitive mind. And this strategy was much convincing for King Adaloald.
“Paul, you are the best strategist, our kingdom has ever produced. You will be
endowed with golden coins once we are back in Pavai.” Paul’s heart fulfilled
with the proud.
Political map of Lombard (493-553 AD ) |
Following
this strategy, troop was divided. One-third of them were diverted to attack
Pompeii. Sparse population, degraded infrastructure, slavery were the features
of Pompeii. Cannon, catapult, sling, crossbow, longbow were used. Lombards very
easily captured Pompeii. One-third of the army was a large troop for Pompeii
than two-third of Lombardian army for Naples.
The
news of acquiring Pompeii by Lombards reached Naples instantly. Till now the
predictions made by the alchemists seem a distant myth. May be this was the
first time alchemists' predictions were going fallacious.
The
Lombardian’s trick worked and Naples was preparing to send their strongest
troops to fight against Naples. King Adaloald happily said, “We will march
tomorrow on Naples.” But it seems nature was having a surprise in its tomb.
BOOM!!
BANG!! The thundering sounds stroke everyone’s eardrums. For few seconds Lombardians went dumb and
they thought they had been attacked by Naples. The sky was covered with dark
clouds. It started raining, but of ashes. Loud thundering. Sky was so dark that
it was replicating night amidst sun overhead. Breathing became harsher. Calling
someone was impossible. Visibility was minuscule. Land developed wide cracks. Intense
hot lava was pouring out of earth. King went eccentric over this situation.
Their attack was postponed for indefinite time. Mount Vesuvius erupted with all
its might! Puking hundreds of tonnes of ashes and lava in air. Many soldiers
were killed in this catastrophe. Two-third became one-tenth of two-third now.
Though
Naples’ army was undersized, they were quick on field. With less warfare goods
and conversance with the milieu favoured them. Naples on the other hand
utilized this opportunity and demolished Lombards in Pompeii. And shortly
realized the intention of King Adaloald. King Adaloald was unaware of these logistics
that King James Junior, king of Naples had in his mind. King James Junior was
having precise knowledge of every sand grain of this region. He had scholars who can predict the
direction of winds which will carry ashes. Very soon he sent an infantry of
troop from Naples and he himself went with another infantry to attack the
Lombards from Pompeii. Though King James Junior had a small troop, but
unpredicted attack and unfamiliar circumstances lead to defeat of King Adaloald.
King Adaloald surrendered him to Naples and thus Lombard became part of Naples.
Except Isabella and Alessandro all were imprisoned and then they became
alchemist of Naples.
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This is my third consecutive national level winning article. :) Won second prize in VNIT Nagpur's Aarohi national level cultural event.
My previous national level prize winning article on the science fiction of a Dog and a child from parallel universe - Fanciful Dorth - http://sanketthodge.blogspot.com/2013/02/fanciful-dorth.html
Real preserved plaster cast of the victims on the night of volcanic eruption! |
P. S. Though the locations are true, story is completely a work of fiction!! ;)
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